Story info

Ok this is like I sead my first story on quizilla so I hope you all like how it comes out.
ok I will t ry to :)
by the sound of it, this story sucks :P
your info:
Your 18 years old (the boys will be around the same age or maybe 19-20 I haven't decided yet)
hair- dark brown, comes to the middle of your neck, layered, your bangs cover your eyes and are also layered.
eyes- green
hight-5'9"
weight-120
k I like so far, but you could stand to lose some of the info in it there is to much
that sucks your to spusific (SP?)
it's ok so far
now in to your style-
you were mostly the same fashion of clothes as Zelow but not the coat and gloves. When you are training you wear a blue short-sleeved belly-shirt with a pair of hip-huggers jeans (yes they can be flare hip-huggers if you would like), your shoes are Soho brand ( I don't know if that is a off brand of shoe or not, but that is what kind i'm wearing right now so sew me if you don't like it {not really :P}), on your hands you wear a pair of fingerless gloves. As for jewlary (yes there is jewlary on my charactors :'P) you wear a neclace (beaded like one a boy would wear) with a moon charm hanging from it ( the moon is a cresent moon, with a jem close to the middle and under it a star shaped hole) that she wears at all times.
wow that sounds like a cool outfit
that outfit sucks it sounds like something a 5 year old would come up with (walks up and slapes the reader "i'm 18 and that is what I wore to school today you Bakka Amma"
and finally your past and persona (personality) (don't know if that is the actuale word for it)-
She is stubbern and will fight for those she considers her friends, but will never fully kill her target. She is a lone fighter like Kratos, who has an exsphere (SP?) on her upper right arm so that it is hidden from others sights. She was left to fend for herself by her mother and father because they were both to poor to take care of her. You grew up in an abby with Zelos's sister but never knew anything about her or her family, (no you don't hang around her and you haven't met Loyde or his group). Your only friend was a girl who was found on the abbys doorstep when you were a year old and her name was Hope (just for you Hoper, hope you like). As time went on you made another friend named Elizabeth (sorry if I spelled that wrong ShadowedHeart89) who moved to the Abby to get away from her family but was forced to go home when her parents found her)
OK I know that's alot to read but hey I was thinking and righting down ideas for this story all last class couse we had to be doing some form of writing :P

yes that is alot of writing but it's a great charactor (me:you think, reader: of course it had to take alot of time to come up with though, me: no not really :)
that sucked you are one of the worst storie writers ever to come on here (me:That's it you can insult my outfits but never my story ideas, takes out a binder and tries to hit the reader, me: hold still this won't hurt a bit, reader runs for safety from the sicko author, me: ok it will hurt, but it's what you get for insulting me.)
ok hope you liked your character I don't know when I will get to writing the real story though (i'm slow on writing them :P)
no this story will be as good as I want it to be and you suck for saying that it will suck and i'm just confusing myself now so good bye you bakka's